Marilyn, me and Christine - at the Lucidity Poetry Retreat, 2017
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Early in April, three women were in residency at Dairy
Hollow in Eureka Springs. Lee, from NOLA, Kay from Tulsa/New York, and Pat from
AR. All three of us were working on memoirs. [They are not the women in the picture, except for me.]
At 9:30, the night before two of us left for home, we gathered
in the 505 kitchen. Kay brought a novel with her. “For a game,” she said. She
and I drank wine; Lee had dessert: banana cream—a sliced banana (and a little
sugar) covered by fat-free Pet Milk. I couldn’t—and still can’t—imagine
anything with Pet Milk in it as tasting good.
We “gamed” while we visited. Here are the rules: One
writer picks a sentence or two from a novel, writes it on a lined sheet. Then
she passes it to the next, who reads it (silently) and writes something that
continues the first. But before passing it to the third writer, she folds down
the first sentence so that only the second sentence is visible.
The third writer reads the second sentence, then
writes a response to that, folds it so that only her response shows and passes
it on. Around and round it goes until the page is full. Here is the complete
“story.”
“Beth puts a finger to his lips. He stops talking. / “Don’t
say it. I can’t hear it now. Let me have this moment of not knowing. This one
moment.” / “Okay, I’ve settled down enough to respond to your accusations. But
be nicer. Don’t forget to give yourself the feelings and not blame me.”
“Oh, you narcissist! I come to you with my pain, and
all you can do is say ‘Don’t blame me’!” / “That is not what I said. It’s
complicated, don’t you get that?” / “No, it’s not. It’s simple. You simply
admit you’re wrong and I’m not.” /
“Oh, yeah? Is that what your ex-husbands would say?”
/ “No. In fact, they wouldn’t say that. Why bring them into this? Deflecting
again? Can’t you have this conversation?” / “Yes, I could, but, why do it?
It’ll just make things worse—if they could get any worse!” /
“Of course, things can get worse! Aliens could land
in Eureka Springs. The zombie Apocalypse could happen!” / “Sure. Make fun. This
is funny to you, isn’t it? I’m done. When you get serious—if you get serious
about dealing with this, you know where to find me.” / “Until then, I’m moving
to Texas. Let me know when you’ve
decided.” THE END
We three agreed this worked very well with “in-tune”
writers. Since I changed the names of the other two, and they gave me the sheet,
I transcribe it here without asking.
The
next morning, after we had coffee around the same table, Lee began her 10-hour
drive south. I left two hours later for a four-hour drive. Kay stayed for
three more weeks.
In a day or two, two or three new residents checked in to the writers colony. Perhaps
Kay will suggest they play a game. Every day is different. Every writer is
different. Every game will be different.
It’s
so much fun being a writer.
[The women pictured at the top are poets from Texas and were in my workshop group. Here are the others in that group.] I have no photos of Lee and Kay, sorry to say.
Mary and Carol Above: Phyllis & Sandra
1 comment:
We used to play a version of that game when I was a young teenager. Without EVER achieving the polish and panache of your final result.
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